I believe a couple of nights ago...i had the strangest dream...it was reali vivid AND i cud literally write up a story plot...my friends suggested tt i shud expand on it...but currently i'm outta' creative juices...guess i'll do it when it's vacation time n i'm more relaxed ^^ Anywayz here goes...my dreamed up story plot...(had to rephrase n everything n add names ta' the characters pls forgive the slipshot work)
It all began with a girl by the name of Elisia who somehow managed to defy her fate and cheat death. Elisia, using her wits n skills, managed to escape the building which was supposed to explode with her inside, thus killing her. As years rolled by, she found herself trapped in a neverending cycle of watching the building explode right in front of her eyes. It was intolerable for her, however, but she had no choice but to endure it until she could figure out a way to stop the culprit from causing the explosion. ( i nd ta' expand over here...sry ppl) Suddenly, a succubus (or lady devil for that matter >_>) appeared to her and offered some assistance. The succubus could intervene and stop the cycle BUT in return Elisia has to give up her soul. A paper contract than appeared. All she was required to do was sign the paper. Needless to say, she refused. With that, the succubus nodded and disappeared.
Elisia decided to ask her boyfriend for help. He works in a nearby building, but not the actual building itself. Unfortunately, before they could stop the culprit, they got caught. Thus, while
making their escape, Elisia got seperated from her boyfriend though she was too frantic to notice.
As the lift door opened, Elisia ran straight into the lift. Strangely, the door did not open after that. It merely travelled up and down continuously until Elisia decided to force the door open and jump out. What awaited her was something strange and new...
Elisia took a quick glance around and almost immediately saw the culprit who caused the explosion. This time, however, she realised that his face was that of peace and calmness. He had an aura of tranquility of him, unlike the previous time when she saw him, filled with rage and anger. Elisia then realised that she was in a different future altogether but in order for that to happen, it meant that the cycle has ended. But how? she wondered.
Out of the blue, Elisia realised her boyfriend had disappeared. She then started searching for him. After looking for a long while, she still could not see a trace of him. Elisia became frantic until she saw a paper on the floor. Picking it up, she realised that the paper was the same contract paper which the succubus showed to her. Add to that, her horror was amplified when she saw that the paper bore her boyfriend's signature. Elisia went hysterical and started shouting as well as demanding for an explanation.
Almost instantly, the succubus appeared and her face betrayed a hint of pity. She explained that Elisia's boyfriend could no longer withstand seeing her suffer as he was aware of her doomed fate - endless cycle of suffering. Hence, he decided to end her suffering by sacrificing himself. Her boyfriend then appeared for one last time to say goodbye. Elisia broke down and cried...
THEN I WOKE UP!! Please comment on my story haha!! and no do NOT ask me who the ppl were in the story unless you want me to put you through the same fate as the girl XD yar sry for being sadistic ppl XD
Sunday, April 19, 2009
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I'm one year late but I'd say this story has some potential.
It might be better if you change the lady devil into what she is instead of a succubus.
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